Showing posts with label Opinion. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Opinion. Show all posts

Friday, April 12, 2013

Keep Cameras Out! by Keegan M.


Attention School Officials:

Imagine; kids walking in the halls silently, sweat dripping from their brow, glancing around nervously, hoping that for some reason they won’t get in trouble. One kid “pops” out his phone to check the time, a few seconds later school security comes in hauling the boy off to an administrator’s office, all thanks to a shiny black lens out of sight. This is what will happen if you continue to go along with the plan of putting security cameras in schools, you will have stressed out kids, kids that can’t work, and kids getting in trouble all the time.
         
One of the first bad things to happen would be that kids would start getting stressed out; you know that felling when you feel like someone’s behind you, that kind of stress. Kids would nervously look up hoping the cameras wouldn’t notice and then “bam!” he/she gets in trouble because he/she should have been focused on his/her classwork!  You can see school rules do need to be followed, but not word for word, strictly, with no exceptions, whatsoever.

The next bad thing that would happen would be that kids would start failing their tests and their grades would gradually decline into a horrible mixing pot: stress, anger, guilt, sadness, and despair. All because he/she will be yelled at by his/her teachers and family members with put downs and “You need to get this done”, and “There’s a thirteen paragraph essay due tomorrow about how waffles played a major role in the civil war”. The kid would be showered by due dates and report cards; without cameras, that would be challenging, with cameras, impossible.

So after all that; the reports, the essay about the waffles, and under the stress of the mysterious man behind the black lens he/she still had six more periods to go through! And there was no way he/she could keep this up. The kid by the end of the day ends up getting several warnings by the teachers her phone and iPod taken from the teachers, and a phone call home, all in just one six hour school day! This kid wasn’t even a bad kid either because before the cameras he/she had B+’s and A-‘s across the board. But after the camera “experiment” he/she had C-‘s if he/she was lucky but mostly D’s and even an F-! Whoa, talk about a dramatic result, right?

A small minority of people may argue that security cameras “keep kids in line” although all they really do is scare them into submission and force them to act like robots; following every rule down to the letter having no emotion, and no reaction to anything, or else they will be punished.

In conclusion I think that even considering the option of putting security cameras inside school classrooms is a rather inane concept, with kids not focusing, dropping grades and constant trouble. Schools in the United States wouldn’t be as effective or efficient as the method we are using right now. So I must insist that security cameras in classrooms law may not go in effect under any circumstances.

Keegan Metcalf 

Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Ban Child Soldiers by Richard Swanson


Attention President Obama:

How would you like to be young and trained to kill? Wouldn’t like it would you? Well then put it in consideration that there are child soldiers in Africa and all over the world. They are not only being trained to shoot but burn down huts and pound new born babies to death. Young boys are being brainwashed, abducted, and trained to kill.

Young boys are either abducted by the army’s “agents” or sold by their parents. They are being brainwashed to the point where they have no hesitation when they go to shoot the enemy. The armies think that the boys are the perfect weapons because the enemies might have a hesitation towards shooting a child

Young boys are also being trained to kill with no hesitation. For example they will burn down huts when they are told to and they will pound new born babies to death. A thirteen year old was standing guard with a machete in his hand and said I will cut them. This proves that they are being trained to kill because the young boys have no hesitation burning down huts or pounding newborn babies to death.

Finally, girls are being abducted. They are being abducted to be used for cooks and messengers and “other stuff”. The big deal is that the people are not only just kidnapping boys but girls too! The bad guys need to be stopped so they do not endanger the life of other children!

 Some may say that child soldiers are a win-win because they have no cost and they can do the dirty work; however, children are costly. It not only can cost them their lives, but it can cost their parents if the children get abducted. Besides the fact, who gave these “kid-snatchers” the right to judge the moral value of life?!? No one. So I demand you put an end to these wrong doings. The bottom line is that child soldiers should be banned. You guys are the only people who can stop this insanity. Will you do it for the kids or let their lives be wasted? You can save the lives of many children: so do it!

With children being abducted, brainwashed, and trained to kill; there really is no point to living life. It’s not like they get to be free after a certain amount of time. Child soldiers should be banned. How would you like it, President Obama, if YOUR daughters were abducted then handed an AK-47 to kill people with? The children are forced to burn down huts and pound new born babies to death! How would you like to be in World War III knowing that your enemies are children? Grant these children the protection you would give your own daughters. I strongly urge you to put an end to this wicked and unjust practice, by protecting all children.

Sincerely,
Richard Swanson